2015年6月的大学英语四级考试当中，写作部分仍然是图画作文。其中一篇图画描述为：一个女孩告诉自己的妈妈，她已经被妈妈为自己选择的那所大学录取了。题目指令要求考生评论“parents’ role in their children’s growth” ，即父母在子女成长过程中的角色。

　　写作思路分析：

　　图画作文，首段仍然为描述图画主要内容，同时引出话题——父母在子女成长中的角色，为下文铺垫。主体段落：可以从两方面展开。一方面，父母有责任有义务抚养子女;但另一方面，父母应该鼓励子女自己做决定，养成自立的品质，毕竟早晚有一天子女要独立生活。而养成自力更生的品质则可为以后的生活打下坚实的基础。结论段，总结前文，再次强调父母在子女成长过程中既要照顾好他们，又要帮助其养成独立自主的能力，而后者更加重要。

　　根据以上写作思路，文都教育的英语老师提供参考范文如下：

　　参考范文

　　As is clearly depicted in the above picture, a daughter tells his mother a piece of good news that she has been admitted to a university as her mother desires. There is no denial in saying that the cartoon leaves us such a deep impression that we can not help thinking over a question: What role should parents play in their children’s growth?

　　From my point of view, during the process of a child’s growth, the role of parents is mainly listed as the following two aspects. On one hand, there is no doubt that parents are liable to take good care of their children. On the other hand, in children’s personal growth, parents ought to play a role as a person who helps children develop self-dependence, which carries more significance to children’s future life. In other words, parents should encourage their sons or daughters to be independent rather than reliant on others.

　　To conclude, in children’s personal growth, parents are responsible to care for their children. However, considering that they will grow up and live their own life in some day, parents should enable their children to acquire the ability to be self-independent.

　　参考范文中的亮点表达：

　　1. be admitted to +名词. 被允许进入

　　例如：允许入学

　　be admitted to school

　　2. There is no denial in saying that+ 句子 不可否认的是(开头句式)

　　3. leave sb. a deep impression 给某人留下深刻印象

　　4. can not help doing + 名词 情不自禁做某事

　　例如：情不自禁思考这幅给我们留下深刻印象的图画。 (将3和4的表达合并)

　　We cannot help thinking over the picture which leaves us a deep impression.

　　5. be listed as the following aspects 列举如下

　　6. there is no doubt that 毫无疑问的是

　　7. be liable to do sth. 有责任做某事，相当于be responsible to do sth

　　8. carry more significance to s+N 对……更重要

　　9. considering that +句子 鉴于

　　放在句首，用于引出原因

　　10. acquire the ability 培养……的能力，acquire 可以用develop替换。

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