文都教育:2010年6月19日英语四级写作点评

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  文都教育:四级写作范文

  Due attention Should Be Given to Spelling

  作文题目 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

  作文:1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写

  2.出现这种情况的原因

  3.对于这种现象你的认为

  It is becoming increasingly common that lots of students do not think studying spelling is a point of mastering good English.

  开头表明观点,同学不要照题干直接翻译,因为你的翻译作品很容易会和其他千万个学生惊人的雷同。所以下面的句子“Nowadays, a lot of students do not pay attention to their spelling in their English study” 这样的句子虽然没有错误,有可能会引起判卷老师的反胃。

  Increasingly 不断增加的,结合一般现在时,表示现在。扣题“如今”。

  Not the point 是固定短语,表示不是重点。 本文用a point of 表示一点,一个方面。

  Through talking with them, I aware of the fact that common thoughts lead to this phenomenon is that the students only want to get good scores from their tests, which Grammar skills are required more than spelling skills. Not to mention that some of the students only want to improve their spoken English, for a simple reason that this can make them sound cool.

  第二段说明出现这种情况的原因,只要把自己想到的点表达清楚就行了,没有必要为了凑字数多写一些没用的事情。中间分1,2,3来说是很必要的。这样能使文章显得有条理。

  Not to mention, 更不用说,有时好过”firstly ,secondly”

  lead to, 造成,导致这种现象的原因。

  To read with poor spelling skills is easy to produce laughingstocks and sometimes serious mistakes. Different words stands for different meanings. As we are going to use English in our daily life, to understand different signs and ads, even when we are reading news papers, good spelling skills ensure us to get the correct information and prevents misunderstandings from happening. Another fact that students might not see is that spelling skills can make them pronounce well, because different pronunciation comes from different spellings.

  第三段主要是我们针对这样的现象的看法,可以谈谈这样做导致的结果,大家可以把结论放到面,然后再解说,这样能使考官很容易的找到你的“得分点”。有的同学会有很多的想法,在组织的时候应该有轻有重,没有必要每一个都详细的说。

  prevent from,阻止**事情的发生。 Ensure 保证,确保。

  Therefore, I suggest all students to pay attention to all the parts of English; this is the only way to make our English perfect.

  结尾越简单明了越好,带一点点升华,祝愿之类的话。

  Therefore 因此,综上所述。做结论时的必要词汇。

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