模拟训练一

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

 

　　 1.大学校园内各种证书的报考十分火热；

　　 2.大学生考证的利弊；

　　 3.考证面前，我的选择。

　　            The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus

                                                                      

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模拟训练二

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加，校园安全问题备受关注；

2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施。

 

Campus Security

                                                                      

                                                                    

                                                                     

 

参考范文

模拟训练一

【范文】

The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus

Recently, getting certificates has been brought into focus.The advertisements for training schools occupy a large proportion of the bulletin board, and booksellers fill their shelves with many reference books.And eager students spare their money and time for these courses and books.

Getting Certificates has been beneficial in several aspects.The most important one is that with more certificates, students have access to more and better job opportunities.In addition, they can make more contacts with the outside world in the course of getting certificates.However, every coin has two sides.The pursuit of certificates is no exception.Some students believe that the more certificates, the better it is.Getting certificates make the students become bookish easily.Some of them even neglect their routine learning in the process of getting certificates.

As for as I’m concerned, certificates certify students’ previous efforts.But whether these pieces of paper can benefit students or not, depends on what they have really gained.Therefore, before dazzling choices, we must have a clear attitude and scientific strategy, and then certificates are beneficial.

 

【点评】

 

文章以描述大学校园内各种证书的报考十分火热这一现象开始进入主题，逐步分析大学生考证的利弊，最后说明考证面前，我的选择。a large proportion of，make more contacts with，dazzling choices，have a clear attitude and scientific strategy等精彩句式的搭配使用，使文章增色不少。

 

模拟训练二

【范文】

Campus Security

Security issue may sound cliched, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously.Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away.A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying.In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

Above all, we students should strengthen our security awareness.Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately.In addition, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible.Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus.

As to me, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus.Therefore colleges and universities should exert their best efforts to make everyone on campus safe and sound.

 

【点评】

 

文章以描述校园安全出现的问题进入主题，逐步引申到应该及时采取措施，最后进行展望，提出号召。文章第二段使用On the one hand，On the other hand介绍解决问题的方法，使文章意思表达简洁明了。本文使用了一些精彩的语言及句式，例如：In such cases, what measures should be taken to…, strengthen our security awareness, exert their best efforts to, safe and sound等，使文章更具文采。

 

节选自 《大学英语四级考试写作全解读》

                                 

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